Pokemon Comic - Master Ball

My brother and I were planning to do a Pokémon comic together, apply named "Master Ball". We would both work on the planning of each comic, but I am responsible for the art and he is the editor. Each (silent) comic takes place within the world of the video games and focuses on a particular trainer or Pokémon. As of now, we have about 10 comics ready to be drawn.

Unfortunately, I'm having a difficult time settling on an effective and suitable style for the comic so it's been put on the side for now. This is a style I was trying out a few weeks ago. It might be the style I use and it might not be. What do you think?

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Pokémon is owned by Nintendo.